I don’t like the way Been is interacting with that worm/tentacle thingey. It’s too floaty. No sense of weight. Probably going to give that part another pass. Otherwise, going swimmingly.

Tonight I try and write the next comic. Hooray for that. Excited to get back to routine.

Later,

J.

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  1. mouseanderson says:

    I think Been looks great, like she’s spurring the worm on.

  2. admin says:

    I’m happy with her body language – it’s more about how her body is interacting with it. It looks sort of weightless to me.

  3. Mimi says:

    Your creature designs are always top quality. Love it!

  4. admin says:

    Thanks Mimi! I love me some monsters, that’s for sure!

  5. JE Draft says:

    But Been can fly anyway, can’t she?

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