I don’t like the way Been is interacting with that worm/tentacle thingey. It’s too floaty. No sense of weight. Probably going to give that part another pass. Otherwise, going swimmingly.
Tonight I try and write the next comic. Hooray for that. Excited to get back to routine.
Later,
J.





















I think Been looks great, like she’s spurring the worm on.
I’m happy with her body language – it’s more about how her body is interacting with it. It looks sort of weightless to me.
Your creature designs are always top quality. Love it!
Thanks Mimi! I love me some monsters, that’s for sure!
But Been can fly anyway, can’t she?